Ronin wrote:
Not to sound haughty or anything, but thankfully I was wrong about my ideal progress. I figured I'd be just like you...I knew a whole bunch of stuff I wanted to cut out, and figured my already too-short novel, would end up being an over-long short story by the time I finished.
However I'm quite the opposite. In what was basically the first 3 and a half pages, not including the introductory preface that the Warden dislikes so much, I have reformatted it and brought it up to 21 pages. And they're better than the original three, as well. That's not to mention I removed an entire chapter to eliminate one of the unnecessary characters.
I've included better descriptions of the characters I've introduced, changed many of the things that made the story seem...even to bland to me (the friggin' creator), and made the character as multi-facted and personable as I had originall intended him to be, instead of a slack-jawed warrior who can cut a few good one-liners when need be.
<Shrugs> If I keep this up, my 121-page novel is going to turn into 726 pages.
Just keep in mind if you're going to sell this, you will want to keep it to the 80,000-100,000 mark. After that, it gets harder to find a publisher.
I think I'm past the deadwood now--yes, I had bland scenes, too, but this was a NaNo manuscript--so I think the majority of the cutting is done. I sliced abut 10,000 words in all, I think and added about 4,000. Actually, it does not concern me. I'm very good at slicing.
However, most of the week has been focused in Magic, Mensa and Mayhem. I finished the book trailer and put it up (
http://fabianspace.blogspot.com/2009/03 ... -here.html), worked on the book tour, arranged signings, had a TV interview, and updated my websites.
I've done some work on Discovery--at this point, I've divided the manuscript into scenes and am figuring out transitions. I also wrote an article. I've run into a snag with ISIG II, but am waiting to see what comes of it before I make any decisions.
Off to do more marketing.